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Once there was a beautiful little girl named (First Name) (Last Name), she had (h/l) (h/c) and beautiful (e/c) eyes. Everyone loved her especially her father and mother (Father's name) and (Mother's name) (Last name). The entire family was beautiful, (Father's Name) had perfect    black slicked back hair,a chiseled chin that made every village woman swoon,as he got older it  turned into a perfect mixture of salt and pepper hair and grey eyes that looked like the sea during a storm that could be harsh or when looking at his daughter or wife the kindest eyes in the world. Her mother had beautiful (your h/c) hair that always was perfect,beautiful (your e/c) eyes that shined as bright as diamonds, her dresses were hand sewn by herself and were the talk of the kingdom, her corsets always were perfectly tightened not too tight but tight enough that gave her the perfect figure which she didn't need much of. (Mother's name) was a amazing seemtress and (Father's name) was a successful banker.
 
    One year a horrible disease struck the kingdom and (Mother's name) was one that caught it and sadly later on was taken by it. After several years of mourning his wife and the mother of his child, (Father's name) decided to remarry. He wed a woman named Katyuska , she had short blonde hair and blue eyes. She also had 2 daughters by the name of Natasha and Elizaveta. Natasha had long blonde, almost sliver hair and harsh indigo eyes and a harsh attitude  to match. Elizaveta was another beautiful girl with long wavy brown hair and emerald green eyes and a beautiful smile. The first few years, the 3 daughters ,(Your Name),Natasha and Elizaveta couldn't be separated. Several years after his second marriage (Father's name) was struck with the same sickness as his late wife,his last wish to his wife was that including her own that she would take care of (Your name) and to take care of the family wealth.

   Soon after his death Katyuska started to treat (Your Name) MUCH differently, she made her do all of the house chores with servants,she gave her extremely old clothes that were almost rags for when she grew out of her current clothes, instead of a shared bedroom with Elizaveta and Natasha she was forced to sleep in the attic bedroom and she made Elizaveta and Natasha treat (Your name) cruelly and because they were so young they followed their mother's orders and eventually it came second nature to treat you like this.

   The first few years of this it made (your name) feel awful and she cried herself to sleep every night,but she eventually got used to it and almost forgot the life she had before her stepmother and sisters came into her world and crushed it.

   Many years later,little did (your Name) know that her life would soon be changed. And that's where our story begins.

                                 *Your P.O.V.*
  You woke up to the sound of ringing bells in your bedroom,that could only mean one thing. Either your stepmother or sisters needed something and needed it now.

  You groggily rose out of bed and got dressed to start your daily chores.You looked at the labeled bells and found out that your stepsisters needed something and you quickly ran downstairs to their room.
 
   "Yes,what would you two need this morning?" "Ugh, Finally! It took you long enough!" whined Natasha,"We need our corsets tightened we have to look our bests we're going shopping today.Now hurry!" "Yes madam!" you quickly ran over to her and needed and tightened the ribbon of her corset to make her have a perfect figure and have her breast show a large enough cleavage, you did the same to Elizaveta's, she didn't need much tightening because she had quite a lovely figure and almost always had cleavage without trying. "Anything else madams?" "No,now go away" Natasha snapped, Elizaveta was always the nicer one to you she was only mean to you in front of Natasha and Katyuska,other wise she would be punished for disobeying "No,that is all (Name),now on your way" "Yes madam!" you smiled and ran off to do your other chores.

    You a long list of chores that took you until sundown to finish. You were in the kitchen preparing a simple fruit and toast breakfast ,because the three of them were on a diet to fit in even MORE dresses,when you heard the bell to your stepmothers bedroom. You carefully put down the knife you were using to cut fruit and ran upstairs to her bedroom. You quickly wiped your hands on your apron and knocked "Come in,(Name)" You slowly pushed open the large door, "Yes madam?" "You woke up late today (Name)" "I-I'm sorry madam" she sighed "It's fine, I'll let it slide since I'm such a generous stepmother to you" "Yes,you are madam" "Are you preparing breakfast?" "Yes" "Did you remember only fruit and toast with no jam?" "Yes" "Did you help Natasha and Elizaveta with their corsets?" "Yes" "Good, now go check the mail and bring it up with my breakfast" "Yes madam, anything else?" "No,that's it,now on your way,afterwards do your chores" "Yes madam."
 
    You quickly walked out and shut the door you finished preparing breakfast for your stepsisters and served it to them,got the mail and quickly put it with Katyuska's breakfast and carefully ran upstairs. You knocked and waited to be allowed in, when you were you carefully placed her breakfast on the table next to her and handed her the letters and waited to be dismissed. Katyuska  quickly read through the letters until she got to a letter with the royal seal on it. She carefully pulled open the letter and read it,as her eyes widened more and more as she read at the end of the letter her mouth was a perfect o. "Is something wrong madam?" "No (Name)! Everything is perfect we've been invited to the Royal Ball for the prince Gilbert's hand in marriage!" You joyously clapped "What great news madam!" "Yes indeed, good thing were going shopping today,go tell Elizaveta and Natasha" "Yes madam!"
 
   You ran to your sister's bedroom and knocked,"Ugh,come in,what is it?" "Your mother wanted me to tell you that you we  are invited to the Royal Ball for prince Gilbert's hand in marriage" their eyes grew as big as dinner plates and they both screeched with glee. "Yes,Yes,Yes! Were going to meet Gilbert!" Natasha yelled to her sister,Elizaveta looked excited but much less than her sister "Yay!I'm so excited and were going shopping" they screamed again. You were dismissed to do your other chores, you later o found out that the ball was this Saturday and today was Thursday,so the three of them had to get all the beautiful dresses,make-up and accessories they could find in such a small time period.

   As you were scrubbing the main room porcine floors you thought to yourself what type of dress they would buy you to go to the ball.
Hello! This is my first fanfiction ever so please be nice! The era is Victorian Germany. Favorites and Comments are much loved and please tell me if I should continue.
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student General Artist
You really must continue this!!!!!! It's really good!!!!!
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drpepperbabe Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
I already finished it....
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Omg YAY!!!!!!!! :la:
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firepuddles Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
For your fist fan fiction this is extremely well. I would have thought this was one of your latest works! Very well done my dear!!!
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drpepperbabe Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
thank you so much!
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firepuddles Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Welcome!
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hissing-yarrow Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
UKRAINE! HOW CAN THY BE SO MEANITH TO THYITH?!?!
WE ARE FROM THE SAME LINE OF COUNTRIES! ;_;
(hehe this is your first fanfic? It's real good, gurrl.)
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drpepperbabe Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
thank you!
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989466 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
jaskhfgksj your first fan fiction??!??!!! wow this is amazing i cant wait for the next part! keep up the good work :D


lol and i was just thinking, what if the fairy god mother was angel!Britain //shot
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glaceon007 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
This is good~ Can't wait to read more~
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